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Aery Name: Grandesque
Character Name: Kailani Seagle (Addressed as Miss Seagle)
Character Species Combination: White Bellied Sea Eagle (Juvenile stage) [link] / Snow Leopard [link]
Rank: Young Gryphon
Gender: Female
Character Personality: Kailani, or Miss Seagle as she is commonly addressed, is one of the most beloved and respected young gryphons of Grandesque.
She is from a very wealthy upper class family, and as such, behaves accordingly.
However, throughout her time as a young Grandesque, she learns their hidden politics and beliefs the hard way.
Update, hopefully I have improved enough to do half decent art for windsonde challenges e_e
Oh and by the way, her rear end is a duller brown, when she gets older it will change into a more grey snow leopard colour.
Critiques are welcome. I realise I'm terrible at colouring, any tips would be appreciated.
Aery Name: Grandesque
Character Name: Kailani Seagle (Addressed as Miss Seagle)
Character Species Combination: White Bellied Sea Eagle (Juvenile stage) [link] / Snow Leopard [link]
Rank: Young Gryphon
Gender: Female
Character Personality: Kailani, or Miss Seagle as she is commonly addressed, is one of the most beloved and respected young gryphons of Grandesque.
She is from a very wealthy upper class family, and as such, behaves accordingly.
However, throughout her time as a young Grandesque, she learns their hidden politics and beliefs the hard way.
Update, hopefully I have improved enough to do half decent art for windsonde challenges e_e
Oh and by the way, her rear end is a duller brown, when she gets older it will change into a more grey snow leopard colour.
Critiques are welcome. I realise I'm terrible at colouring, any tips would be appreciated.
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My, she's adorable! The forelegs in particular are quite well-done, I think. I can't do gryphon hands half that well.
Umm, critique. Right. Feel free to ignore me if this turns out to be totally irrelevant.
If I had to pick something, even though it's a ref sheet, which doesn't always need shading, I'd suggest working a little on that. The way you have it going, the body appears to be almost pillow-shaded, whereas the wings seem to have the light source coming from above. If you were to simply darken the shadows underneath the wings and body, it might make her seem a little more tangible. Also, as Freakorama1 mentioned, a little more shadow on the tip of her tail probably wouldn't hurt.
If all you were looking for were coloring suggestions, she looks pretty good there. Maybe a little transition between the gray and brown areas of the wings, but that's totally up to you.
All that being said, I honestly think she looks perfectly fine (and awfully cuddly) as is, but that's my input if you're looking to improve. Good luck with the war event in Windsonde!
Umm, critique. Right. Feel free to ignore me if this turns out to be totally irrelevant.
If I had to pick something, even though it's a ref sheet, which doesn't always need shading, I'd suggest working a little on that. The way you have it going, the body appears to be almost pillow-shaded, whereas the wings seem to have the light source coming from above. If you were to simply darken the shadows underneath the wings and body, it might make her seem a little more tangible. Also, as Freakorama1 mentioned, a little more shadow on the tip of her tail probably wouldn't hurt.
If all you were looking for were coloring suggestions, she looks pretty good there. Maybe a little transition between the gray and brown areas of the wings, but that's totally up to you.
All that being said, I honestly think she looks perfectly fine (and awfully cuddly) as is, but that's my input if you're looking to improve. Good luck with the war event in Windsonde!